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I was having a discussion with friends the other day and when one of them asked asked me the creepiest question about my trip last month. I might never wish to revive those horrific moments ever in my life again.Nevertheless they were friends so i could not withhold it just with me.So this place has a pivotal but rather a horrifying experience in my heart.The dog howling and within an abrupt time you witness it’s snarling, so you can fathom easily that something is amiss.The same happened with me.Drowning into the thoughts I recalled everything.Its the same situation when your astonishement compells into a deep sorrow.

So my story starts with me meeting a callous guy who was apparently a stranger but he told me that we are acquaintances.Well it was evident that I didn’t meet him earlier even though I met him cordially.The meeting is still embedded in my mind because of the greusome moments I had with him.I never thought in my wildest dream that I could face this kinda atrocity.And I condemn those who say that you can whatsoever trust your friends.I am still trembling whilst depicting it,it gives you a feeling of collecting shards of life you’d love to leave behind but I am just propelling to give it a try because I never want it to dangle in front of my eyes every now and then whatsoever.My partner seemed to be a modest guy but he took advantage of my naivety.Even now whilst explaining you everything I have those falterations and I am currently in indecision what shall I do!? I strongly feel that nepotism should be abolished so as to find a way out of the dearth of money and so that no one would ever moun for food and essentials.Well it all starts with the society which tries to predominate you and crumbles you when they see nerds like you.But you shall never be intimidated by any of these,try to remove that grimace from your face and replace it with a ear to ear grin.Whenever you feel low you should withhold the rope of God and ask him for help.There are many things you do out of your own instinct and that might help you in changing your fate.And never be a diplomat who just out of his arrogance steps on the already crouched people. Its evident when you sometimes chide yourself for anything amiss you actually grow and it’s not otherwise.

I was too anxious to write this story nevertheless I wrote it.

HUH...

Is the sentence formation right?​

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omg

r u an author??

the sentence formation is not right but it's perfect

u r amazing

just note that in first para u wrote asked twice in the same line