I was walking across the street of a remote area when I heard strange sound coming from the abandoned house. I reached there and suddenly there was an evil laugh........
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I was walking across the street of a remote area when I heard strange sound coming from the abandoned house. I reached there and suddenly there was an evil laugh. The scorn in the laughter gave me creeps. I was baffled by the so unearthly laughter. Was there a ghost, or perhaps a brain fade. Overcome by anxiety, i decided to check out the place from which everyone feared...
I stepped into the porch and that old-school creaking of wood got on my nerves. It gave me goosebumps. I pulled open the door, which was quite weird as usually all doors open when pushed. I took a stepped further and the door rammed on my back. I was all alone in the darkness. With time, as my eyes grew accustomed to the darkness, I began to see things faintly. To my surprise, it was just the opposite of our world. The bed, drawers, TV everything was on the roof and the fan was on the floor! To be honest, I didn't know what on Earth was happening. I further moved towards the house and made the exit through the back door when I saw......
A world, my house, my school, everything but it was covered in vines and it was all dark out there. The sky was purple with circling clouds and everything looked evil. I realized the fact that I was trapped in the other dimension. The darker world which is a copy of ours but is resided by monsters. I heard a scornful laughter again, and the next instant I saw a monster. I ran as fast as my legs could carry, but WHAT THE HELL! The monster could teleport. It blocked my way and as i turned around, there were more of them, thousands of them. The next instant I heard a voice, "WE'LL TAKE OVER YOUR WORLD" and then he pounced on me...
I guess you get what's gonna happen with mankind...
NOTE- I wrote this story in my English exam and I got just 3/10 due to following reasons-
☢Lack of reality
☢Informal English
☢Negative ending
☢☢☢ HOPE IT HELPS ☢☢☢
☢☢☢ BRAINLY ELITE TEAM ☢☢☢
I was walking across the street of a remote area when I heard strange sound coming from the abandoned house. I reached there and suddenly there was an evil laugh. The scorn in the laughter gave me creeps. I was baffled by the so unearthly laughter. Was there a ghost, or perhaps a brain fade. Overcome by anxiety, i decided to check out the place from which everyone feared...
I stepped into the porch and that old-school creaking of wood got on my nerves. It gave me goosebumps. I pulled open the door, which was quite weird as usually all doors open when pushed. I took a stepped further and the door rammed on my back. I was all alone in the darkness. With time, as my eyes grew accustomed to the darkness, I began to see things faintly. To my surprise, it was just the opposite of our world. The bed, drawers, TV everything was on the roof and the fan was on the floor! To be honest, I didn't know what on Earth was happening. I further moved towards the house and made the exit through the back door when I saw......
A world, my house, my school, everything but it was covered in vines and it was all dark out there. The sky was purple with circling clouds and everything looked evil. I realized the fact that I was trapped in the other dimension. The darker world which is a copy of ours but is resided by monsters. I heard a scornful laughter again, and the next instant I saw a monster. I ran as fast as my legs could carry, but WHAT THE HELL! The monster could teleport. It blocked my way and as i turned around, there were more of them, thousands of them. The next instant I heard a voice, "WE'LL TAKE OVER YOUR WORLD" and then he pounced on me...
I guess you get what's gonna happen with mankind...
NOTE- I wrote this story in my English exam and I got just 3/10 due to following reasons-
☢Lack of reality
☢Informal English
☢Negative ending
☢☢☢ HOPE IT HELPS ☢☢☢
☢☢☢ BRAINLY ELITE TEAM ☢☢☢
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