Question

I woke up in the morning . My left eye got a strain when it was exposed to the sunlight.I turned my body on the left side and got a strain in my right eye too.When I opened my eyes I saw the fan rolling and rolling for two minutes.After that I went to the bathroom, brushed my teeth and splashed some water on my face.I was finally awake.

Make this this more descriptive and use good vocab?

Answer 1

I think you should remove "I turned my body to the right side and got a strain in my right eye too.

If you want to make it a little better you could remove "After that i went to the bathroom." And Add " I made my way to the bathroom."

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