I wrote this short story and I need to see if it is good.
Please rate this on a scale from 1 to 10 with 1 being the worst and 10 being the best.
Here is the story:
Have you ever felt as if someone was following you?
But when you turned around nobody was there?
Let me let you a story about a girl who had this same exact situation but her suspicions were correct and that there was actually a person following her…
It all started when Linda Colesman was walking back home after going grocery shopping.
It was cold and dark.
Nobody else was there.
As she was walking from the parking lot to her house she sensed a presence behind her.
Her quickly turned around and saw that nobody was there.
She turned back around and kept walking.
When she entered the house she heard the door slam shut behind her.
Maybe it’s just the wind, she thought.
Linda walked into her bedroom and looked in her mirror…
She saw a person right behind her standing there.
The person looked exactly like her.
Linda screamed and tried to get her phone to call the cops but the doppelgänger stopped her and put her in a bag.
Linda kept screaming as the person carried her to the basement and tied her up in a chair.
“Who are you?”, asked Linda.
She was so scared that tears streamed down her face.
“I’m Sofia.”, said the girl.
“Why do you look exactly like me and why are you here?”, asked Linda.
Sofia replied, “The reason I look like you is just a coincidence and the reason I’m here is to steal your life.”
“What?”, Linda asked confused.
“I see you on social media. You have the life I’ve always wanted. So while you sit here and most likely starve to death while I go outside and live the amazing life I’ve dreamed of. Got it? Good because you don’t have a choice.”, answered Sofia.
Sofia then left the room leaving Linda sitting there.
Linda didn’t have her phone because Sofia took it so she couldn’t call for help.
Besides, the people would call would probably not believe her and think it’s a prank.
5 days had passed and Linda was as pale as snow and hungry.
She used all her strength to try and break the rope.
It worked and she went up to the kitchen to eat.
Sofia was out with Linda’s friends and having the time of her life.
Linda opened the fridge and grabbed handfuls of food to eat.
Once she was full she saw that Sofia forgot to bring her phone with her and Linda took it and called her friends to inform them that the Linda they were with wasn’t the real Linda.
Linda sent the pictures of the evidence to them.
Her friends believed her and immediately called the police.
Sofia was arrested and was put in jail for 7 years as she was found guilty of kidnapping.
Linda’s friends rushed to her house to make sure she was ok.
Everything went back to normal and Sofia was never to be seen again.
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