Question

in the following passage has not been edited there is a mistake in each line and write the incorrect word as well as the correction once the stranger had an attack of influenza during his illness he has nothing to do. so he kept look at the face of someone real man and the man must be living somewhere. he decided that he will try to find the man out. he did not knew why he want to meet him. but he felt that the man and he was in some way inked by fate​

Answer 1

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Actual passage :-

once a stranger had a attack in influenza during the illness he has nothing to do so he kept look at the face to some

Editing the passage :-

Once a stranger had a attack of influenza during the illness he hadnothing to do so he kept look at the face to some.

Changes to be remembered :-

•While editing a passage ,if the matter is of past,we must see that the verbs are also arranged in past tense

•We must have knowledge of AUXILARY verbs too .

•And while editing ,see that they confuse us ,don’t get confused maximum passages are dealt with past only.

•Use past participles in the past tense.....☺