Question

In your school holidays, you attended a course to learn singing, dancing and acting. Your teacher has asked you to write a review of the course for the school magazine.Here are two comments from other young people who attended the course:{It was brilliant! We all learned new things.} {I started to get bored after a few classes.} Write a review for the school magazine, giving your opinions.The comments above may give you some ideas, and you can also use some ideas of your own.Your review should be between 150 and 200 words long. ​i want it to be impressive please and thanks.

Answer 1

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it's too long

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I would try to write wait

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Answer 2

Answer:During the last vacation, I attended a two months’ course - in singing, dancing and acting. It was

designed and managed by a group of graduates from the ‘School of Fine Arts’. Though a little amateurish,

the course was remarkable as it trained us in useful technical aspects of the arts.

The programme – ‘Foundation Course in Performing Arts’- aimed to offer training in basic technical

skills to young students who want to make a career in art industry. The number of seats was limited to 30

and that helped personalised attention in instructions. In addition to the management team, faculty from

various institutes were invited to facilitate various sessions. The course combined activities and lectures

so that experience was supported by theoretical knowledge.

The greatest plus point about the course is that it was a programme, in true sense of the word. A brochure

was given to the candidates in advance and it contained the syllabus and detailed schedule with specific

information about what is done in each session. This clarity worked wonderfully. We had the idea of what

and how we are going to achieve. This also helped to avoid lapse of time and get the best out of each

sessions.

Some participants complain that theoretical sessions were boring. I think this opinion is because of tightly

packed schedules wrongly interpreted. For me, the lecture sessions helped a lot in detailing our

performances.

To put my idea in brief, except for the unprofessional concepts of arts here and there, the course did

marvellous little to mould us into artists. All of the participants could really get fluent with the basic

technical side of their arts. With only two months, it was just one or two inches, but real ivory.

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