Question

Incorrect Correct
e.g. should
can
1. Treating people with respect should
Make this world the nicer place.
It can be where there are less
agression, bullying or violence
It could be a place which
people feel
comfortable and safe.​

Answer 1

The passage has been edited as follows:

Treating people with respect can make this world a nicer place. It can be where there is less aggression, bullying or violence. It can be a place where people feel comfortable and safe.

• Firstly, the usage of a definite article in the first line is incorrect as it doesn't refer to any specific thing. So, an indefinite article 'a' has been used.
• Singular subjects should be followed by singular verbs and plural subjects to be followed by plural verbs. So, a singular verb 'is' should be used.
• Also, the passage is in the present tense, so the present form of the verbs needs to be used.
• In the last sentence, it refers to a place and so 'where' is the perfect choice( which is used for objects).

Answer 2

Answer:

1) the to a

2) are to is

3)or to and

4)which to where

Explanation:

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