is it ryt... the question is Write a diary entry about health and fitness
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I think at the starting it went well. You must have explained a little more about health and fitness like what r the benefits when a person is healthy and fit. There r some grammatical mistakes which can be considered. First,
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Time.
should be at the start. I think it's better to include only abt health and fitness ( mentioning abt the cleanliness), or if u keep a link between cleanliness and health like, ' we also have done some cleanliness because clean and neat surroundings also affect our health'. Keep the total matter in a box. When u said we for the first time before that u must have included who is that we like 'my friends', ' my cousin' or whoever u like. But I must say that if these errors weren't there it's absolutely correct. Good job, u have written well.