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Watching movies is one of my favorite things that I like to do at the weekends. To be more specific, I enjoy the thriller movies which based on a true story more than other types. I like to watch movies with my friends. Last film that I watched was American thriller which classified as one of the top movies at the box office. It shown at the end of August 2018. The film follows a father who is trying to find his missing 16 years daughter. He tries to help the police to find his daughter. He decided to search the one place that no one has searched, hoping to find her. The father tries to contact her friends who she contacted recently. He tries to look at the photos and videos for any possible clue to find her. The film was one of the best movies which I saw.re ) in this paragraph .
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Watching movies is one of my favorite things that I like to do at the weekends. To be more specific, I enjoy thriller movies which is based on a true story more than other types. I like to watch movies with my friends. Last film that I watched was an American thriller which was classified as one of the top movies at the box office. It was shown at the end of August 2018. The film follows a father who is trying to find his missing 16 years daughter. He tries to help the police to find his daughter. He decided to search the one place that no one has searched, hoping to find her. The father tries to contact her friends whom she had contacted recently. He tries to look at the photos and videos for any possible clue to find her. The film was one of the best movies which I had seen.
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