Question

Is this a very bad story for a 10 mark question in english?


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.... the police and caught the kidnappers and rescued the boy . That is how, I found my sister and put the criminals behind bars. ​

Answer 1

Answer:

Which class do u read in? If its for a middle school student, then it's perfect. Otherwise u have to use more heavy sounding words which will help u to fetch more marks. Moreover u didn't attach the remaining part. From what I could deduce from the first part it's a good plot.. U might get 7 out of 10 easily *taking into account the procedures of marks giving by school teachers*

Explanation:

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