Is this a very bad story for a 10 marks question in english as ive got only 5/10 marks in it.
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.... the police and caught the kidnappers and rescued the boy. That is how, I found my sister and put the criminals behind bars.
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oh! don't worry about it.
sometimes it happens in the life.
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In 10 Mark's question you should have written at least two pages.
Grammatically its fantastic.Just Next time try to extend one page more than this will certainly get you 10/10.
Teachers check for content in 10 Mark's question.so try to be bit more creative.
Yet this story could have got 6.5/10.
Hope it helps.
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