is this the correct form of internal dialogue?
Then i told myself, "What if i cant make it"?
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Answer:
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Then I told myself, "what if I can't make it?"
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No, there are a few changes need to made in order for the answer to be perfect.
The correct answer is:
Then I said to myself, "What if I can't make it?"
Explanation:
Internal dialogue or monologue specifically potrays the inner conflicts or deepest thoughts of a person in our literary world.
In a play, what goes on in the head of the character is sometimes written as internal monologue.
Many authors use this formula in order to leave a darker and deeper impression of the story and it's characters on the reader's mind.
Internal monologue are of two types.
- Soliloquy.
- Stream of consciousness.
These two version are used by many fiction artists when they give us a window about the vulnerability of that character. His or her private thoughts.
In the above sentence, the internal monologue js between the conscious mind of the speaker and the sub conscious mind.
Sub conscious mind is doubtful about the situation and so it rises queries that helps the narrator to make a better judgment or character of someone.
The grammar or the notations are similar to direct speech where the quote is coming under the air quotes and any significant markers like Exclamatory or question mark or full stop all comes under the air quotes.