It was your birthday racently . You were
upset because you thought friends and family
members had forgotten that it was your
birthday You went out and when you & came
all your friends were there & Yours family had
organised a surprise party for you write a
diary entry in about 150 words about how you
felt about the whole incident of ?
Answers
Answer:
Dear dairy,
Explanation:
Dear dairy,
Today was the best day of my life as today is my birthday and my mom and dad gave me a wonderful surprise party. First mom dad didn't told me that they have planned all the things as a result I was really sad and thought they forgot my birthday . They even didn't wish me. I was very upset. At evening they took me outside and said we are going somewhere they closed my eyes and when I opened my eyes I saw all my friends and and family members were there wishing me happy birthday. I was really surprised they have planned this secretly. I was really shocked to see all these things. All gave me presents and we all enjoyed. This was one of my best birthday ever.
Answer:
you need to use show not tell.
Explanation:
this means not telling the reader you are upset about you're party.