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Looking on Hagrid, Harry was very surprised.
And at the same time was happy to.
No one celebrated his birthday never
Now Hagrid come with a cake all of a sudden.
He was too telling about his parents to him.​

Answer 1

Answer:

Incorrect Correct

1) to too

2) never ever

3) come came

4) too also

Answer 2

Answer:

Looking at Hagrid, Harry was very surprised.

And at the same time was happy too.

No one celebrated his birthday ever

Now Hagrid came with a cake all of a sudden.

He was also telling about his parents to him. (or) He was telling about this to his parents as well. (P.S.This sentence fits more to the scenery or else the first one is correct.)