Question

kuch likha hai maine ... is it good or not ? and tell me what you think about this?
Main abh darr ne lga hu...
Is duniya se ladte ladte abh haar ke paas pohchne lga hu...
Thoda rukna chahta hu ...teher kr teri baahon me aana chahta hu...
Pr Yeh duriyan
isiki ijazat nhi deti hai mujhe... isiley tere hote hue bhi khudhi ko sambhal ne lga hu...
Sach toh yeh ke tere bager jinna aur ladna aata hai mujhe...
Tere bger zindagi bhi jinna aata hai mujhe...pr tere aage khud ki kamiyon ko rkhna chahta hu...
Tujhe dikhana chahta hu ki iss dill ke piche .
Dill joh tujhse pyaar krta hai,.
be intehaa mohabbat krta hai ,uske piche apni ek andheri nagri aur apne saare dukho ko chupa kr
ked kr...tujhe apni khushiyan maan-e-ji rha hu...

Rona chahta hu tujhe gaale lga kr
Par ise pahele apni khushiyan tujhe dena chahata hu...
Tujhe pyaar krna chahta hu.
apne dukh tujhe bta ne se pahele tera saath chahta hu...
Main toh Bus tera saath aur tera pyaar chahta hu...​

Answer 1

Answer:

sory to say that I don't know