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ASSESSMENT /
PRACTICE
ASSIGNMENT
Grammar (Edito
The following passagesh
given. Write the incorrect word
thar you have supplied.
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Damon. He has a friend called Pythina
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who lived in others kingdom. The two
were great friends but were hardly ever
seen apart. If Damon did not went to visit (h)
Pythias then Pything came to see Damon.
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(1)
An ancient Greeks are in
many importance ways the founders
of the modern world. It are true that
there culture flourished thousands
on years ago, and the ideas, building
designs and governments that them
founded anciently still existing
on the Western world today.
(g)...
(b)....
(c)....
(d)....
(e)....
(A....
g
Columbus set sail on Friday, a 3rd August, (a)
1492. His first destination is the
Canary Islands. This islands were the
westernmost point for the unknown
world. Nobody had explore the sea
beyond this point. Columbus has to stay
at the Canary Islands if his ship had
lost its rudder but it had to be repaired.
.
(2)
Many people leads their lives
strictly following a laws of the
place they live on. We call
them law abiding citizens. There
lives is straight forward, simple and
without many mystery or intrigue.
.
(a)....
(b)....
(c)....
(d) ....
(e)....
(h) ....
(1) ....
.
(3)
King Dionysus was a extremely rich and (a)....
a cruel tyrant which ruled over Syracuse, (b)....
one of the kingdoms of Greece. In its (c)....
kingdom there was a young men called (d) ....
(5)
(a)....
A foolish men was on his way
(b)....
to a temple on the top in a hill. There
was a stone in his path. He think his
mean neighbour had thrown them there. (d)...
Answers
Below is given the paragraph with correct phrasing.
Explanation:
- An ancient Greeks are in
- many importance ways the founders
- of the modern world. It are true that
- there culture flourished thousands
- on years ago, and the ideas, building
- designs and governments that them
- founded anciently still existing
- on the Western world today.
This paragraph can be rewritten as:
Ancient Greeks are, in many important ways, the founders of the modern world. It is true that their culture flourished thousands years ago. The ideas, buildings and governments that were founded by them anciently still exist on the western world today.
Editing- Paragraph 1, 2, 3, 4 and 5
Explanation:
Paragraph 1
An ancient Greeks are in
many importance ways the founders
of the modern world. It are true that
there culture flourished thousands
on years ago, and the ideas, building
designs and governments that them
founded anciently still existing
on the Western world today.
a) An.......The
a) An.......Theb) importance......... important
a) An.......Theb) importance......... importantc) are........is
a) An.......Theb) importance......... importantc) are........isd) on........of
a) An.......Theb) importance......... importantc) are........isd) on........ofe) them........they
a) An.......Theb) importance......... importantc) are........isd) on........ofe) them........theyf) existing......... exist
a) An.......Theb) importance......... importantc) are........isd) on........ofe) them........theyf) existing......... existg) on......... in
Paragraph 2
Columbus set sail on Friday, a 3rd August, (a)
1492. His first destination is the
Canary Islands. This islands were the
westernmost point for the unknown
world. Nobody had explore the sea
beyond this point. Columbus has to stay
at the Canary Islands if his ship had
lost its rudder but it had to be repaired.
a) a....... the
b is....... was
c) This......The
d) explore...... explored
e) has........had
f) if........as
g) but.......and
Paragraph 3
Many people leads their lives
strictly following a laws of the
place they live on. We call
them law abiding citizens. There
lives is straight forward, simple and
without many mystery or intrigue.
a) leads..... lead
b) a........ the
c) is......... are
d many......any
Paragraph 4
King Dionysus was a extremely rich and (a)....
a cruel tyrant which ruled over Syracuse, (b)....
one of the kingdoms of Greece. In its (c)....
kingdom there was a young men called (d) ....
a) a....... an
b) which.......who
c) its.......his
d) men...... man
Paragraph 5
(a)
A foolish men was on his way
(b)....
to a temple on the top in a hill. There
was a stone in his path. (c) He think his
mean neighbour had thrown them there.
a) men...... man
b) in........of
c) think....... thought