Mountains and Dunes a travel company created an attractive and illustrative brochure for its prospective customers. However, an insensitive content writer created the following content which was sure to crash the business. Come and explore the undiscovered India with us. We provide an excellent service to all those traveling with us. Our special customers staying in seven-star accommodations are treated as kings. If you are one such privileged customer, our staff will be available to you 24x 7. Men would fall in love with the adventurous treks and camps we provide. Mountains and Dunes cares about women and children too. It brings to you the freedom of cooking your meals anytime of the day in the state of art kitchens attached with every accommodation that we provide. So come enjoy and feel at home with Mountains and Dunes. Remember we choose the best locations for you. You will surely enjoy our services. Though our rates are a relatively high but it is justified with the class of tourists we cater to. Bag packers are not out clients. Remember- we are a class apart and so are our clients. a. What are the supposedly inappropriate elements in the paragraph written by the content developer? "LONG ANSWER"
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Inappropriate elements in the paragraph:
- Although the price is high.
- Including special customers.
- Bag packers are not our customers.
- Discrimination between the activities of men and women.
Explanation:
- Developers should not include the sentence "although the price is high".
- This usually discourages interested customers from using the service.
- Developer added inappropriate specification "Special Customer".
- This is inappropriate as some customers may view this as well treated compared to others.
- Another incorrect statement is "bag packers are not external customers".
- This can send a negative signal to smart customers.
The article can be written this way:
- Discover the unknown India with us.
- We provide excellent quality service to our customers.
- We treat you like royalty whenever you have the chance to stay in our 7-star property with state-of-the-art kitchens.
- Our staff is available 24/7 to provide support and guidance.
- Mountains and dunes are suitable for everyone, regardless of gender, age, race.
- We offer the best choice for the places you always admire, offering quality service to different classes of visitors.
- Everything is affordable and within your budget, so please enjoy it.
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