English, asked by jojieondona, 5 months ago

my father is 45 years old. he plays football.he goeas jogging.he does not play tennis anymore.his wrist was broken.this happened two years ago.which of the correct compound or complex in this sentences?​

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Answered by VEDESWARITS
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Answer:

You would not want to squeeze this whole paragraph into one sentence. There are at least two ideas there, each of which deserves a sentence of its own:

"My father is 45 years old, but he still plays football and goes jogging. He does not, however, play tennis anymore since he broke his wrist two years ago. "

Or the second sentence could be:

However, since he broke his wrist two years ago, he does not play tennis anymore .

There are a few other "valid" variations of how the whole thing could be phrased, but my main points are:

1 . don't jam everything into one sentence, it will be messy and hard to follow;

don't make it a whole bunch of very short sentences either or your prose will sound choppy;

Try to align your sentences with the ideas that you want to communicate one sentence one idea. It may not always be possible or even the best, but in general, I would aim for that.

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