Question

My new poem
Let's start a story,
Jiska Nahi hota the end,
That story is about,
My dear best friend,
Kabhi hum the bilkul anjaan,
Par aaj h ek dusre ki Jaan,
Kabhi hamare beech Nahi tha pyaar ,
But now he is my one and only yarrr.........to be continued.
Plzzz tell me how is it

Answer 1

WOW!! You have written very well