Question

■ MY question is related to english grammar

■ I write one story write all grammatical mistakes in your answer

■ No spamming

■ Question is related to education not considered as invalid

Answer 1

Heyy.. there are some mistakes.. i have written the correct one which should be replaced there..you remove your words and add my words..

1st line- he wants

9th line- he wanted

10th line- so the man

12th line- he also offered

16th line- he was not capable

19th line- which was charged by
the man

20th line- he was thinking about how would he pay such a huge amount to get the role.

And at last - he went to his friend and told him the matter and asked him to lend some money.


Hope it helps you..

By the way ur story is exellent..

Plzz mark it as the brainliest..

Answer 2

Hey ❗❗
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↪1st line ->In story we use past tense so it should be was instead of is
& instead of want it should be wanted

↪ 2nd line -> for an impressive look use star instead of hero & it should be in past so instead of doesn't use didn't .__________________________

↪7th line ->It should be overpowered instead of overpower & it should be met instead of meets
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↪ 8th line ->don't cut was
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↪11th line ->To make u r words impressive write 'Offered' instead of asked

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↪12th line ->the line should be like that.. A man also offered that
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↪ 13th line ->It should be like.. 'Hero's role '
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↪ In 14th line ->It should be charged instead of charge
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↪ In 16th line ->It should be he was not capable
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↪18th line ->It should be like 'which was charged '
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↪In 19th line ->Use was instead of had as it is not past perfect tense & also it should be 'how he will pay the money '

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↪In 20th line ->It should be met instead of meet

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↪21st line ->It should be requested instead of request and cut out the word 'giving '

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↪corrections for last two lines -> 2 hours in the park but his friend didn't came here and just because of that he was not able to get any rule

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