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■ I write one story . write all grammatical mistakes which you see in this story
Answer Honestly ☺ and alloted me marks also out of 5
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↪ In 5th line ->It should be like I didn't thought as we write story in past tense
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↪In 9th &10th line ->It should be 'because the appearance was horrific
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↪ In 13th line ->It should be 'I just run '
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↪ In 14th line ->It should be 'I was running ' as it is past continues
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↪ In 15th line ->It should be.. Piranhas was following me ____________________
↪ In 16th line ->It should be.. My heartbeat was increasing
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↪ In 18th line ->It should be Prayed instead of pray
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↪ In 22th line ->It should be like 'a' instead of 'I' and instead of 'is' use 'was' there and instead of help it should be helped
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↪ In last lines ->If she didn't came at right time then I was not going to live long.
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↪well it was impressive congrats u got 3.5/5 keep it up
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↪ In 5th line ->It should be like I didn't thought as we write story in past tense
___________________
↪In 9th &10th line ->It should be 'because the appearance was horrific
___________________
↪ In 13th line ->It should be 'I just run '
____________________
↪ In 14th line ->It should be 'I was running ' as it is past continues
___________________
↪ In 15th line ->It should be.. Piranhas was following me ____________________
↪ In 16th line ->It should be.. My heartbeat was increasing
___________________
↪ In 18th line ->It should be Prayed instead of pray
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↪ In 22th line ->It should be like 'a' instead of 'I' and instead of 'is' use 'was' there and instead of help it should be helped
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↪ In last lines ->If she didn't came at right time then I was not going to live long.
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↪well it was impressive congrats u got 3.5/5 keep it up
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Heya frnd...
5 line=i was so shocked that i cant even think about it.
7 line=there is a big pond near me.
10 line=their appearace was horrific.
12 line=which were like sharks.
14 line=i ran with full endurance.i was running continuously and piranahas were following me.
16 line=My heartbeat was increasing
18 line=Prayed
22 line ='a' instead of 'I' and instead of 'is' use 'was' there and instead of help it should be helped
last lines =If she didn't came at right time then I was not going to live long.
Hope it helps u
5 line=i was so shocked that i cant even think about it.
7 line=there is a big pond near me.
10 line=their appearace was horrific.
12 line=which were like sharks.
14 line=i ran with full endurance.i was running continuously and piranahas were following me.
16 line=My heartbeat was increasing
18 line=Prayed
22 line ='a' instead of 'I' and instead of 'is' use 'was' there and instead of help it should be helped
last lines =If she didn't came at right time then I was not going to live long.
Hope it helps u
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