Question

narrate an incident that has changed my life

Answer 1

Yola!
Well, ofcourse we can't talk about ours!
You have to remember your incidents!
Plus,it would be nostalgic for you to remember them again...
Try to have a greater use of synonyms, vocab,to make your story interesting.
Try to pull the reader on the "edge",if you know what I mean.
All the best!,xD