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It was Saturday and my parents were not at home. Being alone I could not sleep
peacefully...........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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Alone At Home With The Knocking For Company
It was Saturday and my parents were not at home. Being alone I could not sleep peacefully, so I got up and headed to the living room. After searching hard, I finally found the television remote. Trying to be brave I decided to watch a crime thriller. Thinking back now I can't remember the name of the movie. What I do remember is that after watching about fifteen minutes of the movie I switched off the television. Suddenly I heard a loud banging on the door. My parents had the keys so it could not be them. For a moment I thought it could be some kind of criminal. Then I chided myself thinking that honestly was impossible. What could a criminal want with me anyway? But on the other hand, who would knock on the door at 11pm? Braving myself, I slowly opened the door but there was no one outside. I bolted the door, ran to my bedroom and hid under the covers, spending the whole night convincing myself that it must have been a prank of some sort. The next morning the neighbours were talking about some teenagers knocking on everybody's doors last night. And then I finally got some sleep.
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It was Saturday and my parents were not at home. Being alone I could not sleep peacefully, so I got up and headed to the living room. After searching hard, I finally found the television remote. Trying to be brave I decided to watch a crime thriller. Thinking back now I can't remember the name of the movie. What I do remember is that after watching about fifteen minutes of the movie I switched off the television. Suddenly I heard a loud banging on the door. My parents had the keys so it could not be them. For a moment I thought it could be some kind of criminal. Then I chided myself thinking that honestly was impossible. What could a criminal want with me anyway? But on the other hand, who would knock on the door at 11pm? Braving myself, I slowly opened the door but there was no one outside. I bolted the door, ran to my bedroom and hid under the covers, spending the whole night convincing myself that it must have been a prank of some sort. The next morning the neighbours were talking about some teenagers knocking on everybody's doors last night. And then I finally got some sleep.
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It was Saturday and my parents were not at home. Being alone I could not sleep peacefully, they had gone forout of town for a work at morning and they told me that they will be coming back next day at evening. Time passed, and it was night, I am afraid of dark, so I decided to eat the dinner fast and go to sleep early so I won't feel frighten. It was 8:00pm I went on my bed to sleep but I couldn't. I could here strange noises coming but I knew it was just the fear of my mind and nothing else! But the feeling you get when you are alone is obviously frightening, so I decided to call my friends at my home. I thought about doing a night out with my friends, since we have holidays of Christmas, I decided that calling my friends at home can be a better option. But I had to take the permission of my parents, I had my mobile, I called them and asked them if I could call my friends for a night out at house. They said alright, but they warned me not to make any noise as it might trouble the neighbours.
There I went to my friend's house in an exciting mood to call for the night out, We were four, we decided to watch a movie so we won't get bored. We watched movies, Played games, Slept for some time, Read books, ate some snacks and it totally took my fearful mood away! I was very happy with my friends. It was a great night! As I was with my friends, I was totally in a happy and cheerful mood! Later we ate some snacks as we were so hungry! My friend had bought some sandwiches to eat, and she had made it herself, and those were tasty! My friends saved me from the boring night and made me happy! It was indeed a great day I won't forget. Next day we all together made some pasta to eat as breakfast, cooking together and that to with friends is a great thing! We later ate it by watching a funny movie! My day was great.
My parents came home at evening. I shared my entire experience with them! They too felt good for me.
Hope it helps..!
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It was Saturday and my parents were not at home. Being alone I could not sleep peacefully, they had gone forout of town for a work at morning and they told me that they will be coming back next day at evening. Time passed, and it was night, I am afraid of dark, so I decided to eat the dinner fast and go to sleep early so I won't feel frighten. It was 8:00pm I went on my bed to sleep but I couldn't. I could here strange noises coming but I knew it was just the fear of my mind and nothing else! But the feeling you get when you are alone is obviously frightening, so I decided to call my friends at my home. I thought about doing a night out with my friends, since we have holidays of Christmas, I decided that calling my friends at home can be a better option. But I had to take the permission of my parents, I had my mobile, I called them and asked them if I could call my friends for a night out at house. They said alright, but they warned me not to make any noise as it might trouble the neighbours.
There I went to my friend's house in an exciting mood to call for the night out, We were four, we decided to watch a movie so we won't get bored. We watched movies, Played games, Slept for some time, Read books, ate some snacks and it totally took my fearful mood away! I was very happy with my friends. It was a great night! As I was with my friends, I was totally in a happy and cheerful mood! Later we ate some snacks as we were so hungry! My friend had bought some sandwiches to eat, and she had made it herself, and those were tasty! My friends saved me from the boring night and made me happy! It was indeed a great day I won't forget. Next day we all together made some pasta to eat as breakfast, cooking together and that to with friends is a great thing! We later ate it by watching a funny movie! My day was great.
My parents came home at evening. I shared my entire experience with them! They too felt good for me.
Hope it helps..!
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