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My little 10 years daughter Sarah was born with
muscle missing in her foot and wears a brace all the time
she came home jumping up and down one beafutiful spring
day to tell me that she had competed in afield day”- that's
where they have lots of races and other competitive events
because of her leg support my mind raced as I
d as I tried to
think of encouragement for my sarah i wanted to tell
to tell some
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hard facts of life not letting this to get her down Bu
But, before
I could get my word out, she said, Daddy, I won tw
sald, Daddy. I won two of the
races! I couldn't believe that! and then Saralı came o
a declaration, I had an advantage.
Ah, i knew it. i thought she must have been 8
head start, some kind of physical advantage. but
efore I could say anything, she said, Daddy, i didn
len Sarail came out with
Daddy, i didn't get a
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