Question

O iris my beloved, when you are around the spring is colorful, i am that crazy night, and you are that shining star. Our meeting is something divine, cant you tell after dying on you, have i learned to live. Make my life colorful with you around let me be yours, please give me a sign. Wherever i go, i can smell your fragrance, whatever i do is revolving you. You are the dream i dream every night. I'm the lonely desert you are the moonlight i have left everything, i have come to just you. There is only your name in my eyes, cant you see ? For me everything is after you, and keep in mind one thing. I'll never go, leaving you alone, i am the flowing passenger, and you are a silent shore.

Answer 1

this is very nice you have written this lines

Answer 2

Very Nice! Maybe do more into depth about the feelings this person has