Question

Once upon a time there was a hare and a tortoise in a forest. The hare used to Insult the tortoise for it’s slow pace. One day the hare challenged the tortoise to make a race. The tortoise accepted the challenge. Then they fixed a date and a place,they also choose a starting point and a finishing point. On the fixed day the race begun. The hare run really fast and it leaves the tortoise far behind. After few moments the hare thought the tortoise is too slow, I might take a rest for a while. But the hare slept for too long. Meanwhile the tortoise didn’t stop it continued running. When the hare woke up it saw that the tortoise already cross the finishing point. And then the hare realized that slow but steady win the race.((did I make any grammatical mistake in this story. If I did pls correct them)) ​

Answer 1

Answer:

yes just one mistake dear that of begun you used third ok