Once upon a time there was a hare and a tortoise in a forest. The hare used to Insult the tortoise for it’s slow pace. One day the hare challenged the tortoise to make a race. The tortoise accepted the challenge. Then they fixed a date and a place,they also choose a starting point and a finishing point. On the fixed day the race begun. The hare run really fast and it leaves the tortoise far behind. After few moments the hare thought the tortoise is too slow, I might take a rest for a while. But the hare slept for too long. Meanwhile the tortoise didn’t stop and he continued running. When the hare woke up he saw the tortoise already cross the finishing line. And then the hare realized that slow but steady win the race.((did I make any grammatical mistake in this story. If I did pls correct them))
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1st tortoise for its slow speed
2nd the hare ran very fast
correct these two and the story will be very good
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in second last line cross must in past tense , it must be crossed.
in 5th line choose must me chose.
instead of starting point and finishing point you can write beginning point and ending point.
in 6th line day must be date
in 7th line hare ran really fast and left the tortoise behind
after few moments the hare thought that the tortoise is too slow , he might take rest for a while
when the hare woke up he saw that the tortoise had already crossed the ending line
and is not needed , write :- then the hare realized that slow but steady wins the race
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