one thing you don't like 250 words
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So my essay for this prompt is about the quality of education in my area, which I care a lot about. If I could change anything about my hometown, it would genuinely be that. I write in the essay about the effect of low-quality education on students' mental health, aspirations, and chances of getting into college. The essay is basically about how much better and more successful and happy those in my community would be if we had more funding for our school.
I have had the essay reviewed many times on here, and I got various comments such as:
"It seems you may be writing about this to explain why your academic achievements are weak" (Which is absolutely not true. My academics are very strong IN
SPITE of my quality of education)
"It seems like you are complaining"
"It is a bad idea to diss your school"
About half of all of the reviews had suggestions such as these.
It seems to me that these comments are here either because the topic itself is a bad idea to write about, or it is simply how I am writing about it. I hope the latter is true, because I really do care about the effect of education on students, and I want the colleges I'm applying to to see that.
So my question is: Is this just a bad topic to write about? Do I have to pick something else? Thank you:)
please mark me as brainliest
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I am a nice human being with beautiful dreams, high expectations about myself and plenty of aspirations. There is only one thing, that bothers me a lot and doesn’t allow to achieve my goals – procrastination. Each day I make detailed plans for the next day. When the day comes, I keep postponing my appointments again and again and at the end of the day I see that I haven’t done enough. Time passes faster than I can imagine, and there is little to show for it. If there is one thing I could change about me, its procrastination. I am so good at it that if there would be some kind of award for procrastination, like the coveted world cup football trophy, I would be a champion! I am always in a mad rush to complete tasks and assignments just a few minutes before the deadline.