Question

please check this is it right ​

Answer 1

yes this is completely right well done!

Answer 2

This is to inform all the students….
It should start like this
Then it should come our school has decided to
Then it should come to go to a picnic
Then it should come the school is going to take the students through an aeroplane
Then it should come the students interested can give their names to the class incharge.
Then it should come the fees of the tour is going to be Rs 10,000 per student.
Then it should come the tour is going to be conducted for six days.
See I have just modified the paragraph.
You read the paragraph which I wrote below

This is to inform all the students that the school has decided to conduct a tour to Disney land for 6 days. We will be taking the students through an aeroplane. The fees of the tour is going to be 10,000 rs per student. The students interested can give their names to their respective class incharge
Thank you