Question

Please correct it the

Answer 1

a) admired⇒admiring (also there should be a comma between September & and)

b) was⇒had

c) correct

d) increased⇒increasingly

e)that⇒the

f) correct

g) comma (,) ⇒ period (.)

h) do not need comma + it ⇒ they

would spend the evening together with joy. (period ⇒ comma)

i) As ⇒ as

Answer 2

admired-admiring

was-were

a-the

increased-increasingly

that-the

from-at

fond-fondly

it-they

would-could

are-were