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please find error in each line
Inactivity is the greater cause of overweight
these days. People physical activity
had decreased these days. The main
reason is there are many labour saving devices.
They does not want to walk on foot. They spend
more time sitting and watch television.​

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Answered by sdsarojdas139
60

Answer:

Inactivity is the greatest cause of overweight these days.Peo

ple's physical activity had decreased these days.The main reason is that there are many labour saving devices.They don't want to walk on foot.They spend much time on sitting and watching television.

Answered by rmb
6

Inactivity is the greatest (changed ‘greater’ to ‘greatest’) cause of obesity( changed 'overweight' to 'obesity' since 'overweight' is an adjective and 'obesity' is a noun)

these days. People’s (added ‘s to ‘people) physical activity

has (changed ‘had’ to ‘has’) decreased these days. The main

reason is that (added ‘that’) there are many labour saving devices.

They do (changed ‘does’ to ‘do’) not want to walk on foot. They spend

more time sitting and watching (changed ‘watch’ to ‘watching’) television.​

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