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Quiet and peaceful, the falls were at tranquility as Harepelt looked along its shimmering waters. He craned his head down, silently lapping from it's waters, gratified that the cascades were clean and plentiful, unlike some water sources within Tideclan territory. As he drank, his ears swiveled forward, spotting some minnows darting around below his nose. He debated between smacking his entire head into the water to try and hunt them or just to simply accept the drink.
He ultimately decided that prey was abundant enough right now and that he didn't exactly need to resort to soaking his whole head for such small fish. As Harepelt finished his drink he looked out upon the torrents, taking in the lovely sight before having to return to his duties.
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Quiet and peaceful, the falls were at tranquility as Harepelt looked along its shimmering waters. He craned his head down, silently lapping from it's waters, gratified that the cascades were clean and plentiful, unlike some water sources within Tideclan territory. As he drank, his ears swiveled forward, spotting some minnows darting around below his nose. He debated between smacking his entire head into the water to try and hunt them or just to simply accept the drink.
He ultimately decided that prey was abundant enough right now and that
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