Please help me find mistakes in my letter
Hi Peter!
It was very nice to get a letter from you/ How are you doing? I am studying well in school. I am doing great and hope you too. I've just got your letter. So I will be doing my best to help you.
First as you know your parents are very smart and kind people. Do you remember how they help me to have a job when I was in a hard situation? All deal they decide wisely. I am sorry your parents disagree with your choice. But don't forget that they wish only all good for you. My advice is in you should listen your parents and submit documents to both of universitys. They are adult people, and they definitely know what will be better exactly for you.
Maybe my advice seems senseless for you. But it is your life and only you decide the way your future go on. I wish you doing better now.
All good wishes, take safe in this time. Bye!
Your Lakeisha
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Hi Peter!
It is very nice to get a letter from you. I am studying well in school. I am doing great and hope you too studying well. I've just got your letter. So I will be doing my best to help you.
First as you know your parents are very smart and kind people. Do you remember how they helped me to have a job when I was in a hard and very hopeless situation? All deal they decide wisely. I am sorry your parents disagree with your choice. But don't forget that they wish only all good for you. My advice for you is, You should obey your parents and submit documents to both University. They are adult people, and they definitely know what will be better exactly for you.
Maybe my advice seems senseless for you. But it is your life and only you decide the way your future go on. I wish you doing better now.
All good wishes, take safe in this time. Bye!
Your Lakeisha
I have made some changes may be it would help you..