Question

Please hurry fast!!!
Revise the work of flash fiction you wrote in the previous lesson. Start by improving the content and narrative techniques, such as the plot, dialogue, and pacing. Then move on to the language: the style, tone, voice, and mood, and the use of slang and idioms (especially in dialogue). Finally, edit to make your story more concise and to improve the sentence variety.
1. What are some aspects of your story's plot and characters that could use improvement? In a few sentences, plan the improvements you intend to make to the plot and characters.
2. What are some ways you could improve the narrative techniques in your story? In a few sentences, plan the ways you can polish the pacing, dialogue, transitions, or description (including imagery and figurative language) to improve the overall storytelling.
3. Look for places in your story that have an inconsistent tone and mood. Describe how you plan to change the word choice to improve those sections.
4. Describe how you might use slang or idioms to help your story feel more natural and to better show the feelings of characters, especially in dialogue.
5. Identify errors in your short story, especially mistakes in sentence structure or anything that makes your text hard to read. Also look for sections that don't use enough sentence variety. Summarize the edits you plan to make so your teacher can find them in your final draft.
6. Now revise and edit your short story. Make all the changes you described above. When you finish, include your final draft in the space below.

Answer 1

Explanation:

प्लीज हरी फ़ास्ट रिसीव द वर्क ऑफ फ्लेश विशन यू नॉट इन द प्रीवियस लेसन स्टार्टेड बाय इंप्रूविंग कंटेंट एंड नेगेटिव टेक्निक सर्च ऑफ द प्लॉट डॉयलॉग्स एंड पिक्चर्स ऑन द लैंग्वेज स्टाइल टोन वर्जन मोड एंड द यूजेस ऑफ सिलेंडर इस फाइनली टू मेक डोरेमोन एंड वैरायटी