please if any wrong in this story point me out and please say it is good or bad. next part is in the next post
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If you dont mind i can point out more
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In line 10-11
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His sense of humour had made him so capable that he could even make a glum faced man sitting beside him laugh abruptly
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last but 6th line
you can change it to 'Knowing that his father.....
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It is a good story and your writing too
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