Question

please see the attachment and tell me that is it perfect and correct? ❌ no spam ❌​

Answer 1

Answer:

The whole format was correct and choice of words are also very good

• But, in the 8th line of the body of the letter, " have become increased" should be changed into " have increased " as it is grammatically incorrect.
• Also, I am suggesting a shorter more precise and formal ending to the letter - "Thus, I kindly request you to take strict actions against these activities for the betterment think of the society."

Explanation:

Hope these suggestions help you! please mark as the brainliest if it did.

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