please tell me the correction in this letter
You are Apoorva,Physical Education teacherof Wisdom Public School,New Delhi. Write a letter to the sales manager of Bharat Sports Limited, New Delhi placing an order for sports articles and acessories that you wish to purcgase for your school.
Wisdom Public School
New Delhi
23 February 2015
The Sales Manager
Bharat Sports Limited
New Delhi
SUBJECT: Placing order of sports equipments
Sir
We feel pleased to place an order with your respected firm.The sports equipments mentioned below may be please be sent through VPP within 15 days of the receipt of this letter.
S.no | Quantity name | Quantity
1. | Cricket Bats | 1 dozen
2. | Cricket balls | 1 dozen
3. | Badminton Rackets | 1 dozen
4. | Shuttlecock | 2 dozen
5. | Hockeysticks | 8
We request you to give 20% discount on the printed prices. The equipments must be packed properly and any damage during transportation will be rest with you. there should be replacement for the damaged goods. A demand draft of Rs.500 is enclosed with this letter. I hope we will get best quailty.
We assure you to pay the delivery charges at the time of delivery of goods. A prompt and positive response is highly solicited.
Yours sincerely
(APPORVA)
Physical Education Teacher
Enclosed: Xerox of order list and original demand draft.
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well there is a small mistake near the date
it should be 23rd February2015
well....rest all is good
the letter contains no other mistakes.
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hope it helps
^_^
it should be 23rd February2015
well....rest all is good
the letter contains no other mistakes.
.
hope it helps
^_^
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Answer:
yes its write ...................
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