Question

plz tell me how can i improve my poetry??????????

kuch akshron se teri
tasveer bnayoonga main

kitna hai peyaar tuj se
aaj khoon dol k btayoonga main

dil tera dard krega mere dost
jab aakhon se aasoo bhayoonga main.

Answer 1

aap ko na apni poetry sudhar ne ke liye words ko na simple karna padegaa aur kabhi bhi poetry negative nahi honi cahiye.

Answer 2

You must read poerty to improve your poerty.
Start with simple and small sentences. Do a lot of practice.

Hope it helps you to improve your poetry.