Question

poem: oh maa si meri
written by: sahib ( me)

oh maa si meri
ungal farh oh menu chalaundi
bhulle nu oh raahe laoondi oh maa si meri(2)

menu farh ambraan ch ghumaundi,
jannat vitch oh lai ke jaauoondi.
jd sat lagdi taan gal menu lauoondi,
oh maa si meri

Boorki oh roti di,
baith ke si menu khalaoondi,
khuod bhave oh naa khaavey
par menu jroor khalaundi,
jd sat lagdi tan gal menu laoondi,
oh maa si meri

hun oh mere sapne ch aaundi h,
oh di yaad menu satauoondi h.
hun photo vichon Mamta pyaar, DinDI rehndi h menu
oh maa h meri

so guys how is this poem and it is not happened with me but i have showed the feelings of the person with whom this is happened ... so guys if u like this poem pls follow me ​

Answer 1

ya it is really good and it is also meaningful