Proofreading - this is when you read through all the text in a
document to see if you can find any mistakes. -
- Are all the words correct?
- Is all the punctuation correct?
- Are capital letters used correctly? ---
Bees are very interesting insecs. Bees make honey, which is yummy, but they also help grow lots of important food. They do something called pollinating the food. Without this proces, the food would not be able to grow. Food such as aples, grapes, mangos, peppers and watermelons al rely on bees to grow.
We must look after bees so that we do not lose any of this food. We need to make sure that we make it easy for bees to build the hives that they need to make honey and survive. They need their hive as it is their home.
To help bees survive we must plant lost of flowers that bees like. They can get the pollen that they need to live from these flours. They take this pollen back to the hive to make the honey.
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Answers
Answer:
1) Insects, not insecs -- first sentence
2) Bees dont pollinate food, not a grammatical error but correct it to: They pollinate plants, which in return grow food for us.
3) Process, not proces
4) Apples
5) All
6) "rely on bees to fertilise their plants"
7) Lots
8) Flowers, not flours
Explanation:
Corrected:
Bees are very interesting insects. Bees make honey, which is yummy, but they also help grow lots of important food. They help pollinate the plants which in return grow the food we eat. Without this essential process, the food would not be able to grow. Food such as apples, grapes, mangos, peppers and watermelons all rely on bees to get their plants fertilised.
We must look after bees so that we don't lose any of this food. We need to make sure that we make it easy for bees to build the hives they need to make honey and survive. They need their hive as it is their home.
To help bees survive we must plant lots of flowers that bees need. They can get the pollen that they need to fertilise plants from these flowers. They take this pollen back to the hive to make the honey.