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"one day at bus stop"
one day I was waiting at the bus stop.I was late today so I had to wait for another bus.as usual I was observing people and their busy schedule (running here and there).bus didn't come yet.I saw a person leaving his bag behind the bench.I wondered what could be the reason."did he forget or left it with a purpose".
I was curious to know.so I went near the bag and wanted to see what was in. I remembered my mom's words,"you dont have right on others belongings and never touch which isn't yours".
so....I took that bag and went towards the direction (in which he went).the street was empty......I never went in that direction ever.I could feel the weight of that bag.it didn't sound much.
I finally spotted a factory at the end of that street. it was old and half broken. I thought that man would be in. so...I went in. I couldn't believe my eyes.there were some people who were making bombs .I figured it out as it was somewhat similar in the movies.I found that man commanding them.
a sudden thought in my brain. what if that bag contained a bomb in it.that bag slipped from my hands. the first thing I did was I called my uncle (police)and explained him the situation.he said me to take that bag away from that factory (as its harmful).as that place was empty. I ran so far and placed it in a lake.I waited for my uncle.he came with his team.my guess was correct. there was a bomb in it.but fortunately it was diffused (because of my stupid behaviour with that bag).The team entered the factory and arrested them.
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one day I was waiting at the bus stop.I was late today so I had to wait for another bus.as usual I was observing people and their busy schedule (running here and there).The bus didn't come yet.I saw a person leaving his bag on the bench.I wondered what could be the reason."Did he forget or left it with a purpose?''
I was curious to know.So I went near the bag and wanted to see what was in. I remembered my mom's words," You don't have right on others belongings and never touch which isn't yours".
so...I took that bag and went towards the direction (in which he went).the street was empty......I never went in that direction ever.I could feel the weight of that bag.it didn't sound much.
I finally spotted a factory at the end of that street. it was old and half broken. I thought that man would be in. so...I went in. I couldn't believe my eyes.There were some people who were making bombs.I figured it out as it was somewhat similar in the movies.I found that man commanding them.
A sudden thought in my brain. what if that bag contained a bomb in it.That bag slipped from my hands. The first thing I did was I called my uncle (police)and explained him the situation.He said me to take that bag away from that factory (as its harmful).As that place was empty. I ran so far and placed it in a lake.I waited for my uncle.He came with his team.my guess was correct. There was a bomb in it.but fortunately, it was diffused (because of my stupid behavior with that bag).The team entered the factory and arrested them.
I was curious to know.So I went near the bag and wanted to see what was in. I remembered my mom's words," You don't have right on others belongings and never touch which isn't yours".
so...I took that bag and went towards the direction (in which he went).the street was empty......I never went in that direction ever.I could feel the weight of that bag.it didn't sound much.
I finally spotted a factory at the end of that street. it was old and half broken. I thought that man would be in. so...I went in. I couldn't believe my eyes.There were some people who were making bombs.I figured it out as it was somewhat similar in the movies.I found that man commanding them.
A sudden thought in my brain. what if that bag contained a bomb in it.That bag slipped from my hands. The first thing I did was I called my uncle (police)and explained him the situation.He said me to take that bag away from that factory (as its harmful).As that place was empty. I ran so far and placed it in a lake.I waited for my uncle.He came with his team.my guess was correct. There was a bomb in it.but fortunately, it was diffused (because of my stupid behavior with that bag).The team entered the factory and arrested them.
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'One day at bus stop'
One day, I was waiting at the bus stop. I was late today, so I had to wait for another bus. As usual, I was observing people and their busy schedule (running here and there).Bus didn't come yet. I saw a person leaving his bag behind the bench. I wondered what could be the reason,"did he forget or left it with a purpose".
I was curious to know , so I went near the bag and wanted to see what was in. I remembered my mom's words,"you don't have right on others belongings and never touch which isn't yours".
So , I took that bag and went towards the direction (in which he went). The street was empty , I never went in that direction ever.I could feel the weight of that bag ,it didn't sound much.
I finally spotted a factory at the end of that street. It was old and half broken, I thought that man would be in, 'So , I went in'. I couldn't believe my eyes,there were some people who were making bombs .I figured it out, as it was somewhat similar in the movies , I found that man commanding them.
A sudden thought in my brain, 'What if that bag contained a bomb in it?' , that bag slipped from my hands. The first thing I did, was I called my uncle (police)and explained him the situation. He said me to take that bag away from that factory (as its harmful).As that place was empty, I ran so far and placed it in a lake.I waited for my uncle , he came with his team. My guess was correct, there was a bomb in it. But fortunately it was diffused (because of my stupid behaviour with that bag).The team entered the factory and arrested them.
"""It was an intresting story, and humorous , especially that bomb diffuse part..:))""
One day, I was waiting at the bus stop. I was late today, so I had to wait for another bus. As usual, I was observing people and their busy schedule (running here and there).Bus didn't come yet. I saw a person leaving his bag behind the bench. I wondered what could be the reason,"did he forget or left it with a purpose".
I was curious to know , so I went near the bag and wanted to see what was in. I remembered my mom's words,"you don't have right on others belongings and never touch which isn't yours".
So , I took that bag and went towards the direction (in which he went). The street was empty , I never went in that direction ever.I could feel the weight of that bag ,it didn't sound much.
I finally spotted a factory at the end of that street. It was old and half broken, I thought that man would be in, 'So , I went in'. I couldn't believe my eyes,there were some people who were making bombs .I figured it out, as it was somewhat similar in the movies , I found that man commanding them.
A sudden thought in my brain, 'What if that bag contained a bomb in it?' , that bag slipped from my hands. The first thing I did, was I called my uncle (police)and explained him the situation. He said me to take that bag away from that factory (as its harmful).As that place was empty, I ran so far and placed it in a lake.I waited for my uncle , he came with his team. My guess was correct, there was a bomb in it. But fortunately it was diffused (because of my stupid behaviour with that bag).The team entered the factory and arrested them.
"""It was an intresting story, and humorous , especially that bomb diffuse part..:))""
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