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Q 5. The following paragraph is to be published in a health magazine but has
not yet been edited. There is one error in each line. Underline the error and write
your correction in the space provided.
Incorrect
Correct
Parents love McDonald's birthday parties.
Children insist to organizing parties inside (a)
a common hall. The bearers move in my
(b)
dignified dress. The food served doesn't cost (C)
much as every customer get a prize voucher. (d)
There are a variety of food articles,
(e)
It ranges from Continental to Mexican food. (1)
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Answered by tanish6660
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Answer:

Daniel asked the bank manager for a loan. The bank manager asked him exactly what he wanted the money for. Daniel explained that he wanted to set up his own cleaning business. The bank manager agreed that it was a good idea but urged him to be very careful before investing a lot of money. Daniel admitted that he’d never had his own business before. The bank manager apologised for being unable to promise Daniel a loan immediately. He suggested that Daniel write a business plan and come back in a week. Daniel agreed to return the following Thursday .

… “I was wondering jf it was possible for me to apply for a loan,” Daniel said to the bank manager …Daniel asked the bank manager for a loan. The bank manager asked him exactly what he wanted the money for. Daniel explained that he wanted to set up his own cleaning business. The bank manager agreed that it was a good idea but urged him to be very careful before investing a lot of money. Daniel admitted that he’d never had his own business before. The bank manager apologised for being unable to promise Daniel a loan immediately. He suggested that Daniel write a business plan and come back in a week. Daniel agreed to return the following Thursday .

… “I was wondering jf it was possible for me to apply for a loan,” Daniel said to the bank manager …

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