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Q.7 PUNCTUATE THE FOLLOWING PARAGRAPH USING COLONS, SEMICOLONS,
COMAS ETC.
(MARKS 4 )
Dear Mr Ahmed
We are proud to announce the formation of a new and innovative international advertising
agency Business Promoters International We are convinced that you will recognize our potential
as an extremely effective international advertising agency we are equally convinced that you will
want to choose Business Promoters International to plan international advertising campaigns
Let us tell you a little about our personnel Our five promoters together represent
approximately 45 years of advertising throughout the world the far East Europe the middle east
Latin America and the united states Their languages and cultural backgrounds are as varied
Spanish French Chinese Arabic and Greek Of course all speak and write English fluently This
multilingual aspects of Business Promoters International is a great plus when handling the delicate
matter of translating advertising slogans from one language to another To illustrate the importance
of this you need only recall the unfortunate translation of the Pepsi slogan Come alive with Pepsi
Which was translated in Taiwanese as Pepsi brings your ancestors back from the grave
Business Promoters International is committed to designing advertising tailored to your company's
marketing needs we believe in what our name represents promoting your business throughout the
world we look forward to the opportunity of working with you
Sincerely yours
Brenda Kostas

Answer 1

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Answer 2

Answer:

Dear Mr. Ahmed,

We are proud to announce the formation of a new and innovative international advertising agency “Business Promoters International”. We are convinced that, you will recognize our potential as an extremely effective international advertising agency. We are equally convinced that you will want to choose (Business Promoters International) to plan international advertising campaigns.

Let us tell you a little about our personnel. Our five promoters together represent approximately 45 years of advertising throughout the world; the Far East Europe, the Middle East, Latin America and the United States. Their languages and cultural backgrounds are as varied “Spanish, French, Chinese, Arabic and Greek”. Of course, all speak and write English fluently. These  multilingual aspects of Business Promoters International is a great, plus when handling the delicate matter of translating advertising slogans from one language to another to illustrate the importance of this, you need only recall the unfortunate translation of the Pepsi slogan. Come alive with Pepsi which was translated in Taiwanese as Pepsi brings your ancestors back from the grave.  

Business Promoters International is committed to designing advertising tailored to your company’s marketing needs. We believe in what our name represents promoting your business throughout the world. We look forward to the opportunity of working with you.

         Sincerely yours,

         Brenda Kostas

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