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Q1. To test your mastery of commas, provide the necessary punctuation for the following paragraph. There are 15 errors. When my brother and I were growing up my mother used to summon us home from playing by ringing a solid brass bell that could be heard for miles All of the other kids to our great embarrassment, knew when our mother was calling us and they would tease us by making ringing noises. We begged her to yell like all the other moms but she knew she had a fool-proof system and wouldn't change. One day while we were playing with our friends in the fields behind our homes the bell rang in the middle of an important game. The other kids began their usual taunts that our mother was calling but this time we bravely ignored the bell. When it rang the second time we ignored it again. By the third ring, however we knew that we were in big trouble so we dashed for home. We agreed on the way that we would tell our mother that we just didn't hear the bell. We arrived hot sweaty and panting from our run Before Mom could say a word my brother blurted out, "We didn't hear the bell until the third ring!" Fortunately for us our mother couldn't stop laughing and we escaped the punishment we deserved. please hurry

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Answered by poulamipoddar
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When my brother and were growing up my, mother used to summon us home from playing by ringing a solid brass bell that could be heard for miles. All of the other kids to our great embarrassment knew when our mother was calling us and they would tease us by making ringing noises. We begged her to yell like all the other moms but she knew she had a fool-proof system and wouldn't change. One day while we were playing with our friends in the fields behind our homes the bell rang in the middle of an important game. The other kids began their usual taunts that our mother was calling, but this time we bravely ignored the bell. When it rang the second time we ignored it again. By the third ring, however we knew that we were in big trouble so we dashed for home. We agreed on the way that we would tell our mother that we just didn't hear the bell. We arrived hot sweaty and panting from our run Before Mom could say a word my brother blurted out, "We didn't hear the bell until the third ring!" Fortunately for us our mother couldn't stop laughing and we escaped the punishment we deserved.

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