Read the beginning of George’s personal narrative.
1.Sue worked at the local grocery store. 2.She was in charge of stocking the shelves. 3. She had to arrive at work before daylight, so she could work in the food aisles before the first customers arrived.
What problem needs to be fixed in George’s narrative?
George needs to include himself as a character in the narrative.
George needs to provide background information about Sue.
George needs to add a time relationship between sentences 1 and 2.
George needs to change the pronoun “she” to the pronoun “they.
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Options 1 and 2 are correct.
George needs to include himself as a character in the narrative.
George needs to provide background information about Sue.
Why are these options correct?
- As George is giving a person narrative, he needs to include himself in the narrative; how did he see her or know her?
- George also needs to provide information about Sue's background.
- Who is Sue, her introduction, and why does she have to work so hard in the grocery store to earn some money?
- His narrative lacks some important details about the narrator's relation to Sue.
- There is also no background to the details of the whole story.
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