Question

Read the passage given below.3 sentences in the
passage are numbered at the beginning.Each of these sentences had an
error. Correct the following sentences

1 A tradition is a practice,custom,or story that is
memorised and pass down from generations,originally,without the need for a
writing system.Tools to aid this process include poetic devices like rhyme and
alliteration.2 The story thus preserved are also referred to as tradition,or as
part of an oral tradition.Traditions are presumed to be ancient,unalterable,and
deeply important,though they may sometimes be much less"natural" than
is presumed.3 Some traditions were deliberately invention for one reason or another,
often to highlight or enhance the importance of a certain
institution.Traditions may also be changed to suit the needs of the day, and
the changes can become accepted as a part of the ancient tradition.

Answer 1

should be "passed down"instead of pass down
in third passage it should be an invention,an is missing there
before and there is comma which should not be there gramatically
in the second para,than IT is presumed should be there,it is missing 

Answer 2

1 A tradition is a practice,custom,or story that is memorised and passed down from generations,originally,without the need for a writing system.Tools to aid this process include poetic devices like rhyme and alliteration.



2. The story thus preserved are also referred to as tradition,or as part of an oral tradition.Traditions are presumed to be ancient,unalterable,and deeply important,though they may sometimes be  led much as "natural" than is presumed.



3. Some traditions were deliberately invented for one reason or another, often to highlight or enhance the importance of a certain institution.Traditions may also be changed to suit the needs of the day, and the changes can become accepted as a part of the ancient tradition.