Question

Read the sentence.
Cambria sang in her school’s talent showcase three songs making her grandparents proud.

Which is the best revision of this sentence?

1. Cambria made her grandparents proud when she sang three songs in her school’s talent showcase.

2. Making her grandparents proud, Cambria in her school’s talent showcase sung three songs.

3. Three songs sung in the school’s talent showcase made Cambria’s grandparents proud.

4. Cambria sung three songs making her grandparents proud of the school’s talent showcase.

Answer 1

The best revision of the given sentence is option number 1.

"Cambria made her grandparents proud when she sang three songs in her school’s talent showcase."

Explanation:

• This sentence is the appropriate revision of the given sentence as it directly conveys the message given in the sentence.

• The other three options are no appropriate as they are quite confusing and have poor placement of words.