English, asked by AgentVetic, 1 year ago

Read this essay and mark it out of 30

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Answered by ratan3
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30out of 30 so n8ce essay

AgentVetic: Thankyou so much Ratan1.But can u highlight this essay strong and weak points?
Answered by harishdevkishan
0
I will mark it as 29/30 because in the question you are saying it is an essay but actually it seems like a story. But otherwise it is really nice one. The language used by you is very nice. According to me no weak points but you should work out on your writing to achieve good marks in English.

Hope this helps you

harishdevkishan: Pls mark it as brainliest:)
tiashasha: yes u r correct writing is not too good
AgentVetic: All of you can you please generate a sad situation in this essay.A situation which shows greif.The one with the better Idea gets a brainliest I promise
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