Question

Read this paragraph. Rewrite it on the next page, adding lively verbs and verbals, concrete nouns, and colorful adjectives and adverbs:
At dawn we followed a channel of the Cook River westward toward Pirimapun. Around us were grasslands, palms, and sogo thickets with lots of egrets, ducks, and geese. We scared them when we passed. Above we saw fruit bats flying south like someone controlled them. They were tired. Now they would hide their heads inside their wings and sleep all day.​

Answer 1

Answer:

At down we followed a channel of the Cook River westward toward Pirimapun. Around us

were grasslands, palms, and sago thickets with lots of egrets, ducks, and geese. We scared them

when we passed. Above we saw fruit bats flying south like someone controlled them. They were

tired. Now they would hide their heads inside their wings and sleep all day.