World Languages, asked by Arshiya4102, 11 months ago

Retype these sentences, making them smoother by changing the parts that are italicized. When I was, oh, around eight years old, I thought it would be fun to learn to play the piano. My parents agreed to purchase a piano. They told me that I would be required to practice one hour a day, due to the fact that piano lessons were expensive. At first, I practiced piano for two hours each day, with the result that I progressed very rapidly. Every day for two years I raced home when school was done and practiced the piano with great enthusiasm. Then one day, something happened. I decided I liked baseball better than the piano. Though I can play the piano rather well at the present time , I do not practice as long nor as diligently as I once did.

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Answered by Shaizakincsem
16

By correcting the minor errors we will get this.

Explanation:

  • When I was around eight years old, I thought it would be fun to learn to play the piano.  

  • My parents agreed to buy a piano.  

  • They asked me that I would be required to practice for one hour a day, due to the fact that piano lessons were expensive.  

  • In the beginning, I practiced piano for two hours each day, with the result that I progressed very rapidly.  

  • I learned it with great enthusiasm, every day running from school for piano classes.

  • Then one day, something happened.  

  • I decided I liked baseball better than the piano.  

  • Though I can play the piano rather well at the present time, I do not practice as long nor as diligently as I once did.
Answered by saachirawani
6

Answer:

By Correcting The minnor error we will get..(pic)

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